Score: 6

"Need to tweak a little bit more."

submission: PlumberMan 1

date: August 8, 2006

Go back with spellcheck more times, had some typoes.

But I'm not lowering your score for that.

You need to check for small mistakes a lil bit more. Like some stuff in captions weren't spoken and such.

Ok step to some good flash animation. Not awesome but you'll get the skills you need by experience if you keep on trying!

Score: 8

"Good, but"

submission: Stick Arena (NG)

date: August 8, 2006

It's all good.

But seriously, don't try to hog people to your site by putting a demo instead of full... took some points off for that...

otherwise it's not some masterpiece, but it's really fun and enjoyable!

good job!

Score: 1

"Mediocre"

submission: Alliance Day Collab

date: August 8, 2006

Really, for something where many artists worked together it didn't really appeal to me at all...

It was pretty boring, and some of them looked like they were just doodled like seconds before. I got a slight pique of interest at a dancing hitler... but that's pretty much it...

good luck next time!

Score: 7

"Not bad at all."

submission: Lilium

date: August 8, 2006

Ignore the users who think this is too gory, they should've read the description a little bit more...

Only two things I think you should improve on.

First of all, teasers or sneak-peeks are good and all, but even they go a little bit longer. You should involve a little bit more story, or prolong everything a bit next time. Of course it's ok to leave us wanting a bit more, but then you should post the next one right away ;)

Next suggestion is to just add a little more animation. The effects were cool, but you still could've had the same slow/creepy effect with more movement other than just the common head/arm/hand and such.

Nice art though, you draw explendidly.

As a side note I'm rooting for this "little unborn brother" to kick her arse when he grows up ;D

good luck and I'm waiting for the next one!